Hi my name is Jasmyne I read your story "a bag of oranges" the story is okay I don't I don't got nothing bad to say about it . Other than how the story begin. the story should have begin with more background about the father and son. I also had my own coming of age experience but it does not really relate to the situation because my coming of age experience was me starting to buy my own cloths and shoes and not depending on my mama.The theme of the story was how the son was not grateful for his father because he was embarrassed to be around him. He soon had a coming of age experience he became thankful of being with his father .Something I also had to mature from because i used to hate being with my mama and daddy .But that was a coming of age experience I had to.
SINCERELY ,
JASMYNE
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