Dear erugenia w. collier,

this story was not as Interestinq as I thought. the words that you were using were confusing because you seem very southern. for example "i suppose that futile waiting was sorrowful'.But i do like that the story was short beacause it was easier to finish. i also like the choice of words you used to express something .But overall most important this story did teach a lesson and actually made me think unlike most stories .Although it did not make me want to keep reading. But  it was written by a black author which made it somewhat a culture shock because of the time it occurred. All in all this short story was good  to learn about but fun and interesting was not my opion of the story.

FROM-JASMYNE